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2010-01-01 20:22:36 榕树下网友 [ 任越杰 ]
复习了 怎么还是感觉纠结的难受呢 除了周文是个恶魔 其他都不算坏呀怎么就都想不开呢哎
2004-11-14 11:16:00 榕树下网友
除了感动就没有其他的什么了~活在这样一个环境里 只有死亡是最后的结束,是最后的解脱。可又有多少人敢于面对呢
2004-09-18 08:27:00 榕树下网友
一天了,就傻坐在电脑前听歌吃水果,然后就是看你的文字,这篇比“十年”更让我心动,不过那篇也不错了,反串得很放得开,祝福你,的生活和文字
2004-09-17 07:38:00 榕树下网友
很棒的文字,我喜欢
2004-09-16 06:40:00 榕树下网友
压抑 是不是城市生活过久了的通病 其实现在真的很多人渴望能够不那么一成不变
2004-09-02 02:44:00 榕树下网友
又是一个用这种方式来结束生命的人,好傻,生活是美好的
2004-08-18 00:39:00 榕树下网友
hao好啊
2004-08-17 07:51:00 榕树下网友
怎么会这样呢? 我也感觉要自杀了!
2004-08-17 02:40:00 榕树下网友
我是在7月份看到的这一篇文章,当时感觉很不错,但是因为有些原因只看了一半就没有往下看,过后找了很久都找不到,当我今天再看到的时候我都有点激动了。   我不知道这是不是真的,但是我希望他不是真的,因为我希望每个人都是单纯并快乐的!
2004-08-11 14:16:00 榕树下网友
小说是现实的抽象。没有现实的小说很难想像会是一篇怎样成功的小说,我觉着。现实中的江林死了于否我不敢肯定,但我有理由相信作者在写此篇的同时存在着对感情的某个方面的仇恨,这可以在小璐的境遇中想到些什么,虽然,它是不经历风雨怎么见彩虹般地浪漫结束
2004-08-10 01:14:00 榕树下网友
夏天,就好象是爱情在阴暗的角落滋生的事物.慢慢的生长,一点一点,看着它成长.... 好喜欢夏天的午后,有人陪伴,看阳光透进来照在墙上,折射成一个又一个的几何图形.... 有些人是你的缘,但是那也是你的劫.很多事,很多人要懂的放弃... 渴望一个人的生活方式,偶尔的寂寞,可以让自己的心更清澈.更明了.. 我的**是*** 可以加我希望我们都幸福
2004-08-02 23:57:00 榕树下网友
虽然在我感觉这篇《2003》不及《十年》好,可是篇末的确出乎意料。本来以为江林的举动是因为“非典”的关系呢,看来还是错了,呵呵。夏小天这个人物很小说型啊,那么完美,是缺点吗?
2004-08-02 03:44:00 榕树下网友
个人认为,文章有点做作,内容牵强,结尾太理想化了
2004-08-01 12:12:00 榕树下网友
摇摆不定的感情!
2004-08-01 10:54:00 榕树下网友
很好啊,过程像极了安妮宝贝的手法,结尾也不错拉,没有制造另一个无辜的陆叙:)
2004-08-01 08:30:00 榕树下网友
成人故事 不过还错 很喜欢夏小天 看下去是因为一直希望有这样一位天使能早点出现在剧中
2004-08-01 08:13:00 榕树下网友
开始很精彩,结局却落于俗套了
2004-08-01 07:38:00 榕树下网友
还是属于那种看了开头就能猜到结尾的文章~不过在同类里的确出类拔萃了 -------------------------因为写得比我好
2004-07-30 22:02:00 榕树下网友
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2004-07-30 21:48:00 榕树下网友
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